Got not,what I sought;
Sought not,what I got.
Yet no tears or remorse;
Over open windows,closed doors.
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13 comments:
so many desires untold , yet to unfold? ...
it's damn cool and perfect
In true form , I exist ;
Life is all like morning mist
As i look out , to chart my course ;
Over open windows , closed doors .
@ani
what are those untold desires?? Something's cooking??
@ the spotless mind
Thanks!! a meek effort that was..
@harish
Wow!!!
It is amazing how one can speak volumes in minimum number of words..great poem. I guess as you grow older you realise the beauty of life lies in its unpredictability.
great lines indeed!..well, here's a meek attempt.
Though I have nothing to call mine,
my heart assures me i will be fine
i move on,if to unknown shores,
Over open windows, closed doors.
@ freespirit
thanks.. penned it in C slot.. Somehow, for long wanted to write something on this theme"Open windows,Closed doors".
@Mary Ray Lieu
Wowww!!I guess you cannot call it a meek attempt!!
u r turnin into a real creative poet!! never read a poem which speaks so much in 4 lines!
Totally lost in bliss sublime ,
No dawn , no night, no track of time
Sweet whiff of earth as rain pours ,
Over open windows , closed doors .
Great premise for a poem . Could not stop myself :) .
yup.. you can make the stanzas sound blissful,optimistic,apathetic,hopeful and so on.. lets try stanzas in as many moods as we can :)
Over open windows, closed doors,
Sits a kokila lulling with her verse.
She will seek what she has thought,
Hopes without tears will give what not!
@ anon
that creativity of mine is evanescent!!!!
@gayathri
You are definitely fascinated with the kokila.Do you sing too?
And,again,nice lines there!!
Yeah I used to sing like a solitary reaper whenever Iam blessed with solitude!!!
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